Saturday, 19 May 2012

The amazing art of writing an Urdu column



I write a weekly column for this newspaper, an English language daily, and at times it becomes difficult to comment on things with a perspective that is fresh, relevant and not dated – week after week. Not only that, but one is also required to be coherent and appear sane most of the time (there are some exceptions to the rule though). 

I envy op-ed writers of Urdu newspapers; most of them are not encumbered with notions of relevance and coherence. If one reads Urdu op-ed pieces for a week, it becomes clear that art of writing an Urdu op-ed is quite straight forward. It mostly starts with a story of a brave king of the days long gone and how he took care of his people and somehow linking it to governance issues of a country fighting a multipronged war, battling an energy crisis of epic proportions and is saddled with a population of over 180 million people. Most of the times, the king would not have name and even when there is a name, that particular incident would not be part of the history. I know, I have checked. At times, I have even looked into Dastan-e-Amir Hamza for references mentioned in one of the pieces but the stories were so fantastical that I could not find them in centuries old tales of Amir Hamza.

Introspection is alien to Urdu columnists. Pakistan is never to be blamed for its ills, it is always some foreign powers who are trying to sabotage the fort of Islam and our Islamic bomb (the last I checked, inanimate objects were not practicing any faith but I digress).  The foreign country bashing is not limited to but is generally aimed at United States of America and India – depending on what the topic of conversation is. The really good writers do not just go ahead and blame India for all slights and transgressions – imagined and real – they invent a fictional white Caucasian character they have met in trips abroad and make him say that India is a horrible place where everyone is evil and Pakistan is the ultimate Shangri-La.  After all, the hidden racist within us would agree more with a learned white man than a Pakistani, even if that Pakistan happens to be an esteemed columnist traveling to the foreign lands inhabited by learned white people.

Some Urdu columnists also like to reproduce the fan mail they get, usually from cities like Layyah and Narowal. English op-ed writers cannot do that because they generally do not get fan mail from Layyah. What they do get – and this generalization is solely based on the mail I and two of my columnist friends get – is hate mail for being (a) liberal fascist, (b) English medium elite or best of all, (c) an agent of the foreign variety. 

At times I envy the Urdu columnists. I really like the idea of starting a piece with a fairy tale or two but it is not as simple. For starters, I like to be historically correct and even though I write for a newspaper, my editor is cyber savvy and always asks me to provide hyper links for the internet edition to provide context and to substantiate my argument which puts any fantasies I may harbor about introducing fictional characters in my pieces to sleep. As fantastical historical characters and fan mail from Layyah are not viable choices, one is only left with the option of blaming it all on the "unholy" trinity of India, Israel and USA. This is how one masters the art of becoming an Urdu columnist. 

First published in The Express Tribune, this is the unedited version. 

PS: After reading the comments on the Tribune website, I think I must point out that this is a satire and I do NOT (a) think I have the authority to declare any country/person/idea unholy/evil, it was just written to get a certain point across(b) intend to start a language war (c) represent every person who writes in English in Pakistan.

PPS: I have been trying to get published in Urdu, but failed, So before anyone goes and blames me for not writing in Urdu, find me an editor who is willing to publish me in Urdu. 

PPPS: I envy Urdu op-ed writers. They get fan mail (postal variety) from Layyah and I get hate mail (electronic variety) from Lahore and Raiwind. I really really want to get postal fan mail from places like Naushki, Layyah and Kamaliya (meri choti choti khuwahishat).

3 comments:

ssp786 said...

To a certain extent one can endorse the views of the Blogger but there are various avenues available in Urdu; If you have the ability & courage to do.

عنیقہ ناز said...

Being an Urdu blogger I would like to endorse your thoughts about Urdu columnist but keep in mind its not an easy job to write in Urdu.
For an English columnist its much easier. They have access to the real reports or data or original contents. If one know how to use data most of time its a matter of copy and paste or to explain figure and facts in one's own style.
Not only data but English columnist have easy access to ideas, ideas which comes in English on internet. Just because of language they are much exposed to use internet effectively. Exposure gives courage them to search for new avenues. Unfortunately English columnists have these advantages but many of them too do not work hard.
lets look at Urdu columnists, most of them do not know how to use technology. I heard Javed Chaudhary the famous Urdu columnist has a research team for him. But still he has many errors when he referrs to data or some facts. That may be on purpose. But I would like to give benefit of doubt. There is much difference when you are searching material and when you are taking help for it.
On the other hand it is difficult to produce something in urdu. One gets information in English and translates it in Urdu. And after that mold it into a prose.
Urdu columnists prefer fiction style.I don't know why, its our tradition or may be people like it and after all they are selling their product.
They have fans because they talk in their language, and in the style they like and yes off course they like to be with the thought stream of people. So if people are dying to be another Osama bin Laden, Urdu columnists would brain storm how to be Osama bin Laden in say forty minutes or forty days.
No wonder you get hate mails from Raiwand and Lahore because people who can understand you somewhat lives at these places and not in Naushki the blame goes to our education system.

Unknown said...

I agree with you. Urdu columnists mostly use rhetoric and poetry to prove their point. Urdu columns have no intellectual depth.